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Let's make a toast
To this love lost
Our red string of fate
So crudely severed
But does it matter anymore?
You have already passed from my heart
And I From yours
So cheers to us
The self-centered couple
We were too into ourselves
To notice our love for each other
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So, second one of my 14 love poems. The theme for this one is 'a love lost'. I suppose you could say the story behind this one is simply about two people who were in a relationship, and both of them are so self-absorbed in their problems, or ... just themselves in general that they just don't notice how much the other person cares for them.

SOMETHING LIKE THAT!

I don't know, this is poetry after all, so it's open to your own definitions. Interpret it as you will.

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:iconimaruchan:
I luv this one it's so fookin awshum. So short but with so much feeling.

--
Jesus loves you . . . but everyone else thinks you're an ass.
:chew:

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February 21, 2007
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